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Us together, my love



When I first saw you, I felt something strange
The beat of my heart could be heard at a mile's range
Then you looked at me and I was bewitched by your eyes
I thought "Let me be with you, till one of us dies"

When we were lying there, your head on my shoulder
I wished we could stay there, together growing older
I had a great feeling, pure as a dove
I was certain you were my love

Let me hold your hand
I'll never let go
Us together till the end
Please, don't say no
©2007-2009 ~Neo-Show
:iconneo-show:

Author's Comments

I think the title sucks, but I had a really hard time thinking of one, so have some mercy.
This was made a few weeks back, after one of the best days of my life. I guess this could be sort of a proposal, since it was made for a special someone.
I won't say names, but she knows this is for her.
I hope i can get the guts to talk to you properly, until then, have this...

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:iconkaorodono:
Já te tinha dito, mas digo outra vez ^^ : tá mesmo lindo!
Tens jeito pa isto =] inda bem q o puseste aqi.

***********:hug:

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So I say run, run, my sparkling light
Have your fun and then come home at night
I'm sure you'll tell me something new.
Yeah I can see the world through you.
:iconromancing-the-broken:
good job!!!

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Why can't love mend the trully broken? We need it the most...
:iconneo-show:
Es uma fofa, sabias?
:hug::hug::hug:
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"Yes, my Lord."
:iconneo-show:
Thanks, it means a lot

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"Yes, my Lord."
:iconkaorodono:
O q tu qeres sei eu :eyes:
loool jk ;P

:smooch:
*************

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So I say run, run, my sparkling light
Have your fun and then come home at night
I'm sure you'll tell me something new.
Yeah I can see the world through you.
:iconerebus-the-great:
lol great poem ... hmm its original to make a proposal in deviantart...and knowing the person who the proposal refers to...it was a great job!

Good luck...and im looking foward too see some of your drawings :)

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:devil::devil:Make to the others before they do to you:devil::devil:
:iconneo-show:
Thanks a lot man =)
It wasn't meant to go here, but she liked it a lot and convinced me to submit it
If I can finish anything good i'll submit it, don't worry

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"Yes, my Lord."
:iconerebus-the-great:
:)

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:devil::devil:Make to the others before they do to you:devil::devil:
:iconmetal-gecko:
Really good poem.
Keep them coming.

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May 10, 2007
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