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Eleven days of torment
Each one worst than the last
I can't wait till this ends
Till all this has past

I'm dying inside since you left
To be with you I'd do anything
I can't live without you
How I wish this wasn't happening

If it weren't for the sound of your voice
My soul would be lifeless
My heart would be better if stabbed by a knife

But I have just one choice
Trying to survive the toughest
Eleven days of my life
©2007-2009 ~Neo-Show
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Author's Comments

The eleven days I'm talking about are the eleven I have to be without the love of my life ( 18th to 29th ).
I'm just dying inside every day, I was just compelled to write something. This week she called me a few times, but last week I only had word of her sunday.


Longing to be with you...

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:iconincubustrav421:
Strong and aching words. Love the endurement of the poem,great job :)

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:iconerebus-the-great:
you need to see the good side of the problem ...she will come again... OR NOT !!!! Mua aha ah
just kiding

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:devil::devil:Make to the others before they do to you:devil::devil:
:iconneo-show:
You're evil, you know that? xD
It's okay, we all like you that way x'D

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"Yes, my Lord."
:iconneo-show:
It hurts as hell... Thanks a lot, I love it when I can please somebody =)

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"Yes, my Lord."
:iconincubustrav421:
you do a good job :)

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:iconneo-show:
Thanks, really ^^

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"Yes, my Lord."
:iconerebus-the-great:
looool you called me stupid the entire year ....its nice to be promoted

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:devil::devil:Make to the others before they do to you:devil::devil:
:iconneo-show:
Lool! I was just messing with you ^^
Except the times when you want to be stupid, you're pretty cool =)

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"Yes, my Lord."

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